camshazam (Signed) on Dec 31, 2012 12:19 am (
22. Bitter End)
Very mature and surprising end. This chapter really had me taut with tension over Justin's choice. Great job and a fun read.
utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on May 11, 2009 07:18 am (
22. Bitter End)
Really old story but I only chanced upon this now *u*;
I have to say that this story kept me on the edge. I sorta felt bad for Justin because he couldn't have one of them but at the same time, the ending keeps it realistic.
The last chapter kinda felt like the final rose ceremony for The Bachelor, though I'm not saying that's a bad thing. ^^; All in all, loved it. Will now go off to read your other stories :)
lyss2118 (Signed) on Jun 01, 2007 03:16 am (
12.Storm Out on the Sea)
i really loved this story... esp the ending - soooo much meaning. and it comes close to something i can relate to in my life right now. i really really enjoyed it! Nice work :)
alimera (Signed) on May 29, 2007 10:39 am (
22. Bitter End)
this story was awesome but i must say i'm much more excited now that you've confirmed that there will be a sequel from deranged delusions...that made my summer! can't wait for that! so, once again, great job on this story, and i can't wait to read displaced deception!
glitter15 (Signed) on May 28, 2007 11:49 pm (
Intro: What She's Made Of)
Manda! You LPS! Okay, I'm pretty pissed at your i net right now, cus it's a POS, but what can ya do? Aww, I'm the best editor. You're so sweet-- very good on the ego, biatch. I'm happy for you that you finished this story. Even if you didn't like it in the end, you stuck to it and got it out, which is respectable. I think it was well-written and you did a good job with it, I was just dissapointed for my poor sweet innocent Hannah, and then that ugly, hideous return of the cow Leah. Ahem. Not that I was ever biased or anything. =)
Anyways, I'm soo proud of you. You are the fricken best. Your writing is such a joy to read and I love editing for you and helping you out with your stories. It's always fun times. Oh snap, the "Productions" part at the end...classic. lmao. CLASSIC shit. haha.
I'm so excited for DD2 and I hope I get mad credit for that BOMB ASS, SUHWEET TOTALLY sick title I came up with. You know how many fucking thesaruses I visited to find that shit? ROFL. Love ya biatch.
DD 2 WHOO!
Hollie (Signed) on May 28, 2007 06:26 am (
22. Bitter End)
Look, he grew some balls. Far too late he grew some balls, but I'll give him the points for at least getting there. :o)
lesanne (Signed) on May 27, 2007 10:17 pm (
22. Bitter End)
I love it when I know how a story is going to end before it actually ends. Reminds me that I'm actually in the right major. Yes for learning how to write and market novels.
But really the only choice he could make was to leave them both. There was no way he could be with either of them. Good job.
crash coincidence (Signed) on May 27, 2007 10:04 pm (
22. Bitter End)
*mouth hangs open*
*starts to gather flies*
*wonders if it will ever close*
i just um well wow. i am pissed as hell cause you just dragged up through all that shit and then he picks neither....and at the same time i feel like it was the right thing to do, but i only admit that begrudgedly. i really thought that team leah had won. really truely. *sigh* and yet i still loved it, damn you and you amazing writting. ps. you smell like skittles and mangos. lol
crash coincidence (Signed) on May 27, 2007 09:47 pm (
21. More Love)
AHHH. and just as fast it turns all around. if he thinks he's confused he has nothing on me. for once i respect hannah and feel like she actually has a little backbone, but good lord. this is all so uncertain and I know you know what i want and still I am on the edge of my seat. i'm going to re paint my nails when this is over, i've bitten them to shit....
crash coincidence (Signed) on May 27, 2007 09:33 pm (
20. There Goes My Dream)
I swear to god if this is how it ends i am going to have a heart attack which at my age would be truely tragic. guh. amanda please?? please just tear the band aid off quick and get it over with. i'm not even sure i can look *peeks out* and yet i couldn't love it more (this chapter smells like lavender and vanilla)
lesanne (Signed) on May 27, 2007 06:17 pm (
19. Baby Hold On)
I'm not exactly sure what to write in way of feedback right now. To an extent, I want Hannah and Justin together, but to another extent, I want Leah and Justin together. I think I'm rooting for Hannah more, though, because as much as Justin might be annoyed with her right now, I think he belongs with her. Yes, what Leah did to Justin was shitty, and it's still shitty. He just seemed to be looking for a reason, any reason, to do something that would piss Hannah off, something that would get her to show emotion, and he has now.
Actually, you know what? I hope he ends up alone.
Author's Response: So we've got another for Team Hannah! Lol I love looking at your reasoning because yes, part of it is true in trying to figure Justin out and all that stuff. As for ending up alone...hmm. Never thought of that before. Thanks for checking it out! - Amanda
Vessy (Signed) on May 27, 2007 06:36 am (
19. Baby Hold On)
wow
Hollie (Signed) on May 27, 2007 04:48 am (
19. Baby Hold On)
Yes, you do need to start locking your door at night. Apart from the fact that Leah must have seen what Charlie was writing, realised how much it was pissing off Justin and still kept feeding the shit to him anyway... getting involved with engaged men is all kinds of wrong. Justin also deserves a good square kick where it hurts. Still all wrong. and I'm kind of glad about that actually because I suspected you were going to explain this all away in some way that made me feel sorry for her *lol*
Author's Response: You know me too well, Hollie. Don't you feel even the tiniest bit of remorse for Leah? The tiniest bit? No...oh well, can't say that I didn't try. Thanks again for the reviewwww! -Amanda
crash coincidence (Signed) on May 27, 2007 12:22 am (
19. Baby Hold On)
HOLY HELL! would it be wrong if i did a celebration dance and then thanked you profusely for letting that happen? nevermind it being wrong, it feels so damn right! thanks god. seriously. i feel like a weight has been lifted. i might even pull a hannah and sing a praise chorus right about now. the gist is i loved it (obviously) and need more really soon...write girl write!
Author's Response: Nah it wouldn't be wrong at all lol. I don't know if Hannah would like it if you were leading a praise chorus in regards to her man being with another woman...but I'll be sure to ask her. Your enthusaism kills me. And yeah...right before I checked the reviews I just finished the final chapter to this story so...uh...yeah. ;) - Amanda
Hollie (Signed) on May 25, 2007 02:07 pm (
Chapter 19)
Trace is a well meaning blind man. All he's going to do is put some righteous indignation into the pair of them, all 'how dare he' and make them more determined to hang out. Silly man. Silly man who is actually extremely right, I might add. Melodramatic, but not wrong.
Justin is a masochist, I've decided. Tis the only explanation.
Author's Response: I love you. Enough said. Thank you, as always for the feedback. Wait until Justin pulls out the whips and chains in the next chapter, oh it is going to be sooooo good :P - Amanda
