Comments For Before the End
Kaity (Anonymous) on Dec 16, 2009 08:35 pm (whispers hidden beneath your pillow)
I wish their was more!! i wanna know what happens lol !!



XxSmurfettexX (Anonymous) on Aug 04, 2009 12:28 pm (whispers hidden beneath your pillow)

Oh my gosh this is written so well! I can see everything happening in my head. This is amazing. I hope you update soon! I can't wait for the next one.

~Smurfette

P.S. Could you check out my Nsync story? I'd like more feedback



Author's Response:

Thank you dear ^^; I hope it wasn't too confusing towards the end. The first installment is 'Don Juan,' if you haven't read it yet. The third and final one will come before the month ends. I just have to finalize how it goes in my head first.

Done and done. I'm sorry for rambling ^^;;; I tend to be verbose in writing reviews.




glowbug917 (Signed) on Aug 04, 2009 09:29 am (whispers hidden beneath your pillow)

I love your warped little brain. And this, of course. It's giving me my fix until Dexter starts back up again.

The only thing is the end seems a little too muddled - I'm not sure if it's the therapist's POV or Justin or Justin as a sort of out of body narrator and some specifics would help that. 

Otherwise, fantastic, as per darling!



Author's Response:

You flatter me so *u* I love that show as well~ I hope the last installment sufficiently gives him justice 8Db

And my bad. I shouldn't have uploaded this yet as I wasn't a 110% content with how it is. But fixed. Hopefully that clarifies things. Thank you for the heads up and for reading ♥






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