Well surprise JC, yes she has a son, but wow. And I agree she was supposed to tell him about Adrian, but I guess she couldn't.. *dun dun dun* These lines here This isn’t something little like, oh by the way I have a dog!” JC exclaimed as he began pacing the kitchen. I found that funny, cause JC can get pretty sarcastic when he gets angry, however, angry JC is hot. ;) Oooh I wanna know what happens next.. :D Good job.
Author's Response: Yeah that's how I see JC myself as one who can be sarcastic... LOL
Author's Response: Awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks... I hope to focus on the story more once I finish this paper... I can't wait for winter break...
Author's Response: Great... I' so glad you enjoyed it!