Comments For Incredible You
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 07, 2011 07:24 pm (Chapter 9)

Well surprise JC, yes she has a son, but wow. And I agree she was supposed to tell him about Adrian, but I guess she couldn't.. *dun dun dun* These lines here This isn’t something little like, oh by the way I have a dog!” JC exclaimed as he began pacing the kitchen. I found that funny, cause JC can get pretty sarcastic when he gets angry, however, angry JC is hot. ;) Oooh I wanna know what happens next.. :D Good job.



Author's Response: Yeah that's how I see JC myself as one who can be sarcastic... LOL



kb4jc (Signed) on Nov 01, 2011 06:49 pm (Chapter 9)
wow...good read...better turn out good....love the story

Author's Response: Awesome!



Megan (Anonymous) on Oct 31, 2011 09:30 pm (Chapter 9)
Ohhhhh woof dah...well I guess thats one way for JC to find out about Adrian but probably not the best way. I feel kinda bad for Anabelle with the way that JC reacted but I can't blame JC for reacting that way. Hopefully they can work things out cause I love these 2 too much to see them fall apart. Great update!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks... I hope to focus on the story more once I finish this paper... I can't wait for winter break...



marie (Anonymous) on Oct 31, 2011 08:18 pm (Chapter 9)
loved the chapter :) i hope they work it out and jc listens to her. update soon

Author's Response: Great... I' so glad you enjoyed it!





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