Comments For Broken Wings
glowbug917 (Signed) on Apr 18, 2011 10:27 pm (Chapter 26)

WOMAN! Why must you do this to me?? I just. You are. I swear. I can't even articulate, see what you've done! 

Ahem. Anyway. Poor Charmian - was only a matter of time before the flimsy thread snapped. Still, I cannot wait to see her bringing lots of pain to one devious fucker named Anton. That'll be a good day, and will make me love you again.

(Okay, I'll love you anyway, but you must update immediately!) 



Author's Response: Heehee :op



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Apr 18, 2011 08:07 pm (Chapter 26)

Oh snap.  That was intense and you've got me all worried.  A succubus? That sounds...like the worst STD ever!

although, I am happy that it can be washed off and that JT got to witness Charmian getting territorial.  Is it pervy of me to think that JT and Charmain would probably have epic sex together?  Because I've thought that and I think you should write the get-it-on part already :)

Love it!



Author's Response: Just so you know, this review has pre-empted a joke I've been planning for about five chapters lol





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