theusagirl (Anonymous) on Dec 31, 2010 10:34 pm (Snowed In)
Ooooh...totally love this Southern hospitality moment..that is soo nice that Mia invited him to stay for the night, and lolz I can just imagine Justin singing along with Christmas tunes, but boo on his car dying on him..especially during that blizzard..pretty good chapter you have here.. :)


Keediluv (Signed) on Dec 31, 2010 04:54 pm (Snowed In)
So, you should rename this "It's time for the warm fuzzies' because that is exactly how it feels.  Got me wishing it would snow just a little around here.  Moving on...


azchickadee (Signed) on Dec 30, 2010 06:05 pm (Snowed In)
oh good heavens, woman!  I'm now regretting ever telling you having them sleep together this first night wasn't such a good idea! lol...I love the beginning of this story!!  There are a few issues with you switching tenses but I like where this is headed :)  *next chapter*


musicmel (Signed) on Dec 30, 2010 05:23 pm (Snowed In)

First of all… I am super excited that you had my name! Eek!

Every single line of this was described beautifully; I could visually see everything you were trying to portray. Justin's distance from his family is heartbreaking... but I have a feeling Mia can help change everything!

Fantastic job! Off to the next section!

 





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