*Smacks Mayra* What is this girls problem? Something has happened to change her option on love but what could be that bad?
Super job!
Author's Response: It's killing me too! And JC and Mayra! lol...final resolution is coming, I promise. I'm working on getting this next chapter out but it is being a little difficult and stubborn right now...kind of like these two characters! lol :)
Author's Response: I'm working on it. This next one is proving to be a little difficult right now, but hopefully I will have it done in the next few days :)
Author's Response: lol...it's a great song! I was writing that scene and it just popped into my head so I had to use it :) Mayra has her reasons and they will be explained in the next chapter. Thanks for reading!! <3
I must know why it was for his own good!
Great job!
I like how you're writing this from the standpoint of both present time and a look back at memories. It's hard to do but you're doing it fantastically!
Author's Response:
awww, thanks! I love using flashbacks to help tell a story. It can be difficult at times but it's working well with this one. Thanks for the love! :)
I know you just posted this chapter tonight, but PLEASE update soon. I am SO eager to see how this turns out. Poor JC, mayra really screwed with him. And I hope mayra doesnt shut him out again when he tries to talk to her.
EEEEEKkkk...and you put my fav. song of his in this chapter...it worked PERFECTLY!
Love this girl. LOVE IT! <3
Author's Response: I wasn't planning on having the song in there originally, but as I was writing this chapter out I was like...hey! I know what I can use! lol. I am working on the next chapter. We need to hear Mayra's side of the story and hopefully we'll be able to get some resolution for these two! :)
i read this entire chapter with a smile on my face...thank you. Its so creepy that you described my studio apt that way, bc thats the way my real apt is. I have ZERO pictures up.
And, omg, I'm afraid. I'm afraid, and I want to know what frightens me. Excuse me, but if JC proposed to me, I'd accept (drunk or sober) BUT, I can understand my reaction. I think.
Thanks for the love, hun! I loved it!
Author's Response: hope it made your night better :) Your side of the story is coming next. No pictures? really? That's the first thing I do whenever I move in anywhere is put pictures up!
I love that song. You Ruined Me. It's so good. AND AS WAS THIS CHAPTER, MAN. I'm excited for what happens after. GO GET HER BACK, JC, DO IT.
Author's Response:
best song ever! think he can get her back? I don't know...we'll have to see....